We have been learning how to write a poem we have included adjectives,repetition,metaphors/similes,and personification.
Winter is here
Her eyes icy blue,a smile of shiny ruby leaps at her lips.
Her hair is as white as a snowflake and her dress covers the frozen rivers.
Winter is here
Trees are lonely and upset they feel left out without their colourful leaves.
Plants bend and say their farewell to the cold snowy world.
The air sits in the snow.
Winter is here
Hedgehogs race to their hidden hideout and eat the food they collected.
Hedgehogs find a comfy space and pass out.The birds sit on the wet freezing grass.
Winter is here
On a wet slippery foggy morning the smell of dead plants drifts around the forest.
The smell of soup hovers to my nose
.The smell of smoke from a burning fire filled up the air.
I hope you liked my winter poem and I have a question
would you want to write a poem and if you do what would you write?
that was beautiful, i really liked the ruby leaps at her lips, if i was writing a winter poem i would write that sentence!
and i would write the same sentence if i was writing something like that
thank you very much!